Monday, March 30, 2009

Chapter 3:The Magic Begins

In the bus, on their way to the field, Cleo and Elise had to sit together. Cleo sat by the window so she could admire the pretty views but she was too short to see anything out of the window.  All she could see was her leather backpack that at one point tipped over and her sandwich and apple fell out.  Elise brought a cute pink shoulder bag and it fell too making her chips and nail polish fall out.  "Ew." thought Cleo.  

When they got there Elise took out a light purple, almost periwinkle tent.  "Wow and ew," thought Cleo.  When the tent was set up Elise took out  a perfectly matching soft sleeping bag.  "Wow and ew," thought Cleo.  Cleo took out a black and brown scratchy sleeping bag. "EEEW" thought Elise.  Once they moved into their tent, they went out of it and started playing with the other girls.  Of course they would never want to play with each other.  

They both sat in the merry-go-round at the same time and started fighting over who would play in it. To be mean, Elise (reamember she is a wizard) untied Cleos shoe by looking at it and said "Cleopatra, shoe lace utied!" Cleo didn't care. "Elise, looks like your fashions fallen down!" she said, as she knocked her rivels sparkely, black and silver tiny purse. Cleo, fast so no one would see, snaped her fingers and her shoe lace was tied.Elise , at the exact same time, fast so no one wold see, held out her hands, palms down, over her purse and it flew up to her lap.  

"I saw that!" they said at the same time.
     

8 comments:

Ben said...

I love this latest chapter! I think it's hilarious that they both think each others items are gross, and the fact that they both tried to distract one-another with magic is classic. Your style is very enjoyable!! Hurry up with Chapter 4!!

Susan said...

Great chapter, Ev. I like the way you write, the end line is perfect. I find myself truly wanting to find out what's going to happen to your characters. Keep going!!

Tyra said...

COOL!!!!!!!!

gramalee said...

:) LOL! Very fun! now what happens? xogramalee

Erin said...

You are a great writer! I hope you will keep going.

Migillicutty said...

Very funny, Evie, I love it! This looks like a really interesting story, and I love the ending line! Hurry and write the next chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Goldilocks said...

post more!

Susan said...

Where"s the magic gone???